分页标题#e# “From today on，I will...;I will...;”或者“I plan to do it as follows...”那叫“我的实践”吗?
顶多算是“我的希望”或“我的计划”。这样写就跑题了。可见，切题不仅是指全文，三段中的每一段也存在是否切题这样一个问题。有的考生这样写第三段，就基本上可以说是达到要求了:
As a university student，I pay much attention to my physical exerciser.I do some swimming in Summer and some skating in Winter，I often play badminton and tennis.I m also careful with my diet.In a word，keeping healthy is not very hard if you just take it seriously.
(二)有人可能会问:知道了这几项原则，上了考场我为什么还是写不出来呢?这就牵涉到英文作文的两大考试目的了。
英文作文到底要考大家什么?我们认为，主要考查你的两大方面———思路表达与英文水平。
有的考生一拿到作文题常常会抓耳挠腮，不知道该写些什么，肚里空空如也，这叫做:“没有思路”;也有的人，思路倒有，只是“英文水平”较低;当然，更有一些人“思路”没有，“英文”也不怎么样，要拿高分，其难度就可想而知了。下面，我们分别来谈谈“思路”与“英文”这两件事。
大家知道，到了考场上，作文的第一件事是———思路。有些人，没有思路，只好随心所欲，信手写去，写着写着，自己也不知道写到哪里了。这种作文，难道会条理清楚?难道会中心突出?又怎么能做到干净整洁，不乱涂乱画?因此，拿到作文后的第一件事就是要审题并列出一个提纲。这就好比家中要待客先列出一份菜单一样。菜单列好后，按单去把菜买好，这就叫“素材”，再炒好端上桌，就叫“英文表达”了。
没有菜单，再高明的作家也会“巧妇难为无米之炊”的。列“菜单”，即作文的提纲不必过长，寥寥数语，中、英文皆可。万一上了考场没有稿纸，把准考证翻过来，只言片语可矣!
例如作文“Electricity and Our Daily Life”.①Electricity is essential in our daily life.②If there were no electricity，...③Therefore，...
【Outline】
①电的用途:提供动力/照明/日常生活。②假如没有电:生产/生活，都会受到影响。③因此，我们要节约用电。
Electricity is essential in our daily life.It runs the machines in factories;It starts the vehicles and light the streets and rooms.With it，we can watch TV，listen to the tape recorder，cook meals or store food in the fridge.In a word，it helps us a lot in our daily life.
If there were no electricity，all the machines would stop working.At night，it would be very dark.We would have to wash our clothes with our hands.Students would use oil lamps to do their homework.We would live as our ancestors did centuries ago.
Therefore，electricity is very important to us.Our life cannot go on without it，not to mention the construction of our country.Our country is short of electricity，now. So，everybody should try to save it.
(三)提纲列出之后，下一步就是用比较标准的英文将你想要说的意思表达出来，这就需要有较好的英文基本功底:包括单词、句子结构、语法、词组等等。下面，大家先看两篇作文，其思路还算清晰，文章比较切题，层次也很合理，但是，单就其语言文字方面，有哪些主要问题呢?【例】 Traffic in Big Cities2010-03-31 20:07:23 来源：作文地带整理 双击单词自动翻译
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1、英语四级作文高分技巧
2、分页标题#e# 其中，当你写到prosperous，diligent，unique，booming等词的时候，若是拿不准，怎么办呢? 这时，脑子要学会急转弯，可以用busy，hardˉworking，special，甚至good来替代。尽管busy并不能完全代表prosperous的意思，但是，车水马龙、热闹繁忙的景象，还是可以基本上表达出来的。 需要指出的是，“play safe”这一招并不意味着我们不必下苦功去记一些必要的、十分基本的词汇，有些词的使用率很高，比如computer，environment，efficiency等，是避不开的。还有的考生上了考场，连modern，society，pollution，甚至benefit这类词都拼写不准，那就不能不给人一个基本功太差的印象。 4.开门见山。5.闪光点。 这两个术语是什么意思呢? 让我们看一看“Good Health”这篇作文。①Importance of good health②Ways to keep fit.③My own practices. 先看第一段“好身体的重要性”，有的考生写道:“With the rapid development of our economy，with the improvement of our living standard，with more and more people s realization of the importance of good health，now people are attaching greater importance to their health.”“随着经济的飞速发展，随着人民生活的改善，随着大家对健康的重要性的了解，…”不要忘记，四级作文总共才要你写百十来个字，你一开头 就罗罗嗦嗦说了三四十个字，还没有说到正题上，多么不得要领。切记，好的作文应该单刀直入，直截了当。不要兜圈子，绕弯子，第一句话最好就采用“topic sentence”，点明主题，重点突出———这叫“开门见山”。 因此，我们上来就应该写: “Good health is important to everyone.” “开门见山”之后，也就是旗帜鲜明地亮出自己的观点之后，下面我们应该用事例来支持自己的观点，这些事例，就叫做“闪光点”，如果事例很多，还可以采用“First”，“Second”，“Third”这类的排列方法。 有的考生会说，写议论文先端出论点，再给出论据，这我知道，但是，有时候我想不起来事实或例子来支持自己的结论怎么办? 这时，有两个相当重要的词汇大家应该铭记在心———“with”和“without”，尤其是后一个，议论文中几乎可以算是一把开启各式门锁的“万能钥匙”。如:Good health is very important to everyone.With it，we can study hard;We can serve the country;We can do everything as we like.Without good health，everybody knows，we will fail to do things;We can twork efficiently;We may stay in hospital;We ll become a burden of our family，etc. 记住，with、without不是在说废话，而是在用“正证法”和“反证法”来论述事情。我们再看第二段“保持健康的方法”。 In my opinion，there are two ways for me to keep fit.First，we must eat a balanced diet.That is to say—we must eat not only eggs，fish，meat but also some vegetables and fruit everyday.Besides eating，drinking clean water is also important.Never get addicted to drinking the so-called“soft drinks”.Second，exercising is a vital part of our daily life.We can do some running in the morning and play football in the afternoon. 至于第三段，“我的实践”，有的考生会问:“写点什么呢?”不要忘记，第二段中提到“吃”与“锻炼”是保持健康的最佳途径，那么，第三段还写“吃”与“锻练”———我自己是怎么做的，不就行了吗?还有人会说:“我以前做得不好，那我就写自己的决心和保证吧!”[page]分页标题#e# “From today on，I will...;I will...;”或者“I plan to do it as follows...”那叫“我的实践”吗? 顶多算是“我的希望”或“我的计划”。这样写就跑题了。可见，切题不仅是指全文，三段中的每一段也存在是否切题这样一个问题。有的考生这样写第三段，就基本上可以说是达到要求了: As a university student，I pay much attention to my physical exerciser.I do some swimming in Summer and some skating in Winter，I often play badminton and tennis.I m also careful with my diet.In a word，keeping healthy is not very hard if you just take it seriously. (二)有人可能会问:知道了这几项原则，上了考场我为什么还是写不出来呢?这就牵涉到英文作文的两大考试目的了。 英文作文到底要考大家什么?我们认为，主要考查你的两大方面———思路表达与英文水平。 有的考生一拿到作文题常常会抓耳挠腮，不知道该写些什么，肚里空空如也，这叫做:“没有思路”;也有的人，思路倒有，只是“英文水平”较低;当然，更有一些人“思路”没有，“英文”也不怎么样，要拿高分，其难度就可想而知了。下面，我们分别来谈谈“思路”与“英文”这两件事。 大家知道，到了考场上，作文的第一件事是———思路。有些人，没有思路，只好随心所欲，信手写去，写着写着，自己也不知道写到哪里了。这种作文，难道会条理清楚?难道会中心突出?又怎么能做到干净整洁，不乱涂乱画?因此，拿到作文后的第一件事就是要审题并列出一个提纲。这就好比家中要待客先列出一份菜单一样。菜单列好后，按单去把菜买好，这就叫“素材”，再炒好端上桌，就叫“英文表达”了。 没有菜单，再高明的作家也会“巧妇难为无米之炊”的。列“菜单”，即作文的提纲不必过长，寥寥数语，中、英文皆可。万一上了考场没有稿纸，把准考证翻过来，只言片语可矣! 例如作文“Electricity and Our Daily Life”.①Electricity is essential in our daily life.②If there were no electricity，...③Therefore，... 【Outline】 ①电的用途:提供动力/照明/日常生活。②假如没有电:生产/生活，都会受到影响。③因此，我们要节约用电。 Electricity is essential in our daily life.It runs the machines in factories;It starts the vehicles and light the streets and rooms.With it，we can watch TV，listen to the tape recorder，cook meals or store food in the fridge.In a word，it helps us a lot in our daily life. If there were no electricity，all the machines would stop working.At night，it would be very dark.We would have to wash our clothes with our hands.Students would use oil lamps to do their homework.We would live as our ancestors did centuries ago. Therefore，electricity is very important to us.Our life cannot go on without it，not to mention the construction of our country.Our country is short of electricity，now. So，everybody should try to save it. (三)提纲列出之后，下一步就是用比较标准的英文将你想要说的意思表达出来，这就需要有较好的英文基本功底:包括单词、句子结构、语法、词组等等。下面，大家先看两篇作文，其思路还算清晰，文章比较切题，层次也很合理，但是，单就其语言文字方面，有哪些主要问题呢?【例】 Traffic in Big Cities[page]分页标题#e# 1.Traffic has become a social problem in big cities. 2.One way to solve this problem is... 3.Another way is... Traffic has become a social problem in big cities. Of course，have a car is a good thing，but if every person own a car，the streets will became too crowded. So，traffic jams occurred during the rush hours and accidents happened more often. One way to solve this problem is develop public transportation system.For example，we should buy more buses and we should built more roads，especially round-the-city roads And underground trains is also a good solution. Another way is to reduce the big city s population. Our country population control is a wise and necessary policy.If big city people reduce，traffic will less crowded. 第一句抄起始句，无问题。第二句，作者想说:“有车是件好事。”于是就采取了汉语的表达方式:“have a car is a good thing”，但英文就大错特错了。须知，英文的主语一般只能是四部分组成:名词(含代词)、动名词ving、动词不定式to及句子。动词have是万万不能当主语的。所以，至少应改为“having”。接下来，every person那动词own自然应该加“s”了。(英语作文 www.liuxuepaper.com) streets will后面动词用原形become，第三行so大写“s”，Traffic Jams occurred and accidents happened.动词完全不需要用过去式，那样，就给人以一种:“事情已过去了，现在已经不堵车，也没有交通事故了”的印象。所以，切记，议论文中使用过去式 一定要合理，不要滥用。 第二段“One way to solve this problem is to develop...”才行。一般来说，每句话只应有一个谓语动词(并列时当成一个看)，所以，有了“is”，“develop”必须消掉(消动词有三招，to v，ving，ved过去分词)。We should build...，And应小写。underground trains is...主谓语不协调或改为trains are，或改为train is，后者更好些，因为此处不是在查数，而是在讲一种情况:“地铁”这种形式，是一个好办法。 末一段可改为: Our country s population control is a wise and necessary policy.If the number of the people in big cities is reduced，traffic will become less crowded. 综上所述，一篇英文要想写得很地道，起码应注意以下几个方面: ①主语是上述四部分之一吗? ②谓语动词是一个吗?(每句话一个，从句也算一句话)这个动词时态、语态、语气正确吗?若是在shall，will，must，may，can等情态或助动词后，用原形了吗?除了这个谓语之外的其它动词消掉了吗?(叫做动词的非谓语形式) ③主语与谓语一致吗? ④及物动词或介词后，使用宾语的形式了吗?(主、系表除外) ⑤定语或状语的位置放的合理吗? ⑥从句的引导词使用恰当吗? ⑦单词有没有拼写错误? (四)现在，我们已经知道了作文大体上怎样写: ①审题并列出提纲(约5分钟) ②开始写:(1)切题(2)干净(3)少犯错误(4)开门见山(5)闪光点(约20分钟) ③交卷前检查(1)拼写错误(2)语法错误等(约5分钟) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an announcement to welcome students to join to a club. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1、本社团的主要活动内容 2、参加本社团的好处[page]分页标题#e# 3、如何加入本社团 书信一般不写标题，告示必须写在首行正中央写上标题，今年标题已经给出：“Welcome to Our Club”。 书信一般无需写日期，告示最好写上（如果正文中交代清楚，不写亦可），写作标题右下方，不要空行。 告示的正文可写1－3段，针对四级写作三点提纲的特点，最好写成三段，每点提纲各写一段、详细展开即可。书信中开头结尾的套句如自我介绍、写作目的、表示感谢、期待回信等等，在告示中不能使用。告示的正文时态以现在时和将来时为主。 书信的落款是个人，但告示的署名可以是个人或单位，针对考题，应写为单位：某个社团，应写在答题卡中间偏右的位置。 另外，四级写作最好采用缩进式，段间不空行，每段首行缩进4－5个字母并对齐。 下面是根据我在课上讲过的一个告示改写的一篇范文。 写作范文 Welcome to Our Club June 23, 2007 The Speech Club is organizing school-wide speech training and contests to be held on each Saturday at the Students’Recreational Center. Five prestigious experts and professors will be invited to be speech lecturers and contest judges. For each speech contest, the first six winners will be given awards. Attending our club has substantial advantages. Firstly, it can improve your ability to deliver a speech which is of utmost significance to your future career and development. Secondly, it can help you to possess self-confidence, enrich your extra curricula activities and make your campus life dimensional, colorful and vigorous. To sum up, the experiences in our club will be extraordinarily unforgettable throughout your life. Students who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week (June 26). Everybody is welcome to attend our club. Speech Club 参考译文 欢迎参加我们社团 2007年6月23日 演讲社于每周六在学生活动中心举办全校性的演讲培训与比赛。我们将邀请五名资深专家及教授作为演讲教师与评委。每次比赛中，前六名获奖者将被给予奖励。 参加我们社团的好处很多。首先，它能提高你发表演讲的能力，这对你未来的职业和发展将非常重要。其次，它能帮助你拥有自信，丰富你的课外活动，并且使你的校园生活丰富多元、五颜六色、充满活力。总之，参加我们的社团将是你一生中非常难忘的经历。 有兴趣参加的同学们请在下周二（6月26日）之前在你们班长那里报名。欢迎大家参加我们社团。 演讲社 Curriculum all the courses of study offered in school, college, or university Curricula or curriculums (PL. ) 2006,12 四级Direction： 1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会 2.但有些人提出取消春节晚会. 3.我的看法. The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala（公众娱乐表演盛会）. Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations. It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes. Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs. These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV. Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance. The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives. Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve. They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television.[page]分页标题#e# I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned. Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year. To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan. We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show. 点评： 本次四级考试作文总体上来说并不是很难。但表现出两个出人意料：一是体裁，二是题材。 对于体裁来说，本次四级作文属于正反对比论证类的文体。比较出人意料，又回到了老的考查模式。很多学生把考前死背的作文模板派上了用场。但是这只能得到最基本的分数。虽然模板对于考查学生的语言表达并不益处，但还能测试出考生的语言基本功。从四级考试写作的测试目的来看，还是注重考查学生对基本语法、基本词汇运用能力的掌握情况。所以除了模板之外，考生还要在基本表达上狠下功夫，只有在平时多操练，在考场上才游刃有余。除此之外，学生还要在作文中多采用闪光点，这样就会使作文在基本分数上有所提升，有所突破。 对于题材，本次四级作文的话题是关于人们对于春节晚会的不同看法，属于社会生活类话题，一反常态，没有再次考查校园类话题。但是对于当代大学生来说，与大学生有关的社会话题也是需要关注的，这也说明考试方向的变化：校园类话题与社会热点话题同等重要,这一点对于未来考四级的学生的作文备考的方向有一定的指导意义。 2005 四级作文 Part V. Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below : 1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点 2.校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同 3.我认为…… Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? 参考范文： Should the Uiversity Campus Be Open to tourism? Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attraction. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere. In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study . With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.[page]分页标题
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