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2005高考英语满分作文解析及名师点评(2)

时间:2010-07-19 03:30来源:作文地带 作者:英语作文 投稿收藏:收藏本文
注意:1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。 Dear Jeff, Im Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing. While you

  注意:1. 信的开头已为你写好。

  2.词数不少于60。

  Dear Jeff,

  I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

  While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

  If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

  Best wishes,

  Li Hua

  [名师点评]

  这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的,第一,作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整,内容充实而丰富,结构紧凑,有层次感;第二,本文没有采用华丽的辞藻,但用词十分恰当,段落过渡自然,令人耳目一新。

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