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2008-09-07 00:00:00 来源：网络整理 双击单词自动翻译
持枪歹徒落入法网 【内容提示】 下面是一篇记叙文，叙述了一个持枪歹徒抢劫上海一家银行、杀死一人逃往宁波，后被警察捕获的事。请你在阅读后把它改写成新闻报道。 Guman Flees to Ningbo, Walks into Police Web (网) Zhu Yadi, a woman cashier (出纳员) o
He spent nearly the whole morning at the bank, according to eyewitness＇ accounts, most likely waiting for the lunch break when there would be only one person on duty.
A few minutes past noon, a woman clerk of the neighbouring bookstore was just stepping out of the door when she heard the sound of an explosion. Turning back, she came face to face with a young man dashing out from the bank＇s side-door carrying a glistening pistol.
Police arrived within minutes of the alarm, and the victim, who was lying on the ground in a pool of blood, was rushed to a nearby hospital where she died from a bullet wound that cut deep into her head from the face.
【写法指要】
1）新闻报道文章的题目多以词组或短语的形式出现。如果以句子的形式出现时，动词一般要用现在时态，如本文的“…flees to…”，“walks into…”即是。
2）如前所说，记叙性文章突出文章的结尾，而新闻文章恰恰相反，将最重要的情节放在最前面。本文的结构与原文就正好相反，将新闻的6大要素，即人物、时间、地点、事件、原因、结果大都放在文章一开头的导语中了。
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